KetsuekiDoku Vol.01 Ch.01 ENG [DOWNLOAD]

Wow, this is a really impressive attempt at making a manga!
The art flows well with the story; I like how you used the panels on page 19
For improvement, I'd say try shading w/pencil or maybe even colour. This is just because the pages look a little empty but also because the characters, after being introduced, are a little difficult to differentiate. I think your art skill will improve over time/as you progress in making more chapters.
Overall, a very impressive attempt to make a manga and it's even more impressive to see that you have a fair amount of supporters!

Keep up the good work!
- By Therolieum on behalf of